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I liked the descriptions of Italy and the vineyard. She has a good voice for setting the scene. However, the characters (from just this excerpt) lacked any depth. Everyone felt very bland to me and I couldn't really discern who was who or what they may have looked like. There weren't any strong personalities or physical descriptions. It may get better as the book goes on, but it was a weak introduction to the people.