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I think the premise and message are super meaningful, but the writing just left me unable to suspend my disbelief. The dialogue just didn't feel authentic at all. It felt forced, like someone trying to sound like a teen rather than actually sounding like a teenager. I wouldn't read more to find out what happens next. I think the cover is cool, but the font is killing me.