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Darren gets a job with a salary that could really help him and his family. He doesn’t want to let anyone down. I liked Darren right away, I liked his family and his girlfriend. I want this character to succeed. But then the excerpt got to the part with his first day on the job and his boss seems crazy and mean. I wouldn’t enjoy the story if much time was spent with Darren being treated like this. I don’t know whether it keeps up for long, but there’s a reason the excerpt started at chapter 5 with these scenes selected to represent the book. I think it will be a very interesting story but it’s probably not for me.