Great Story, Poor Execution

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I love the story line here, and the beginning is very promising. However, as you go on the characters become difficult to believe in and the dialog started to become irritating instead of believable, with a lot of repetition and it started to get a bit annoying. I was unfortunately unable to finish this book because I got frustrated with the dialog.
They did a great job with the cover design, this book in person is such a treat! I also was really curious about how it would turn it. It's just too bad that I was unable to actually read it all the way through because the characters couldn't keep me interested. I'd say to give this book a chance, you might be able to make it over that hump, and in that case this could really be an excellent book.