Intriguing Character Tension
The cover really drew me in, and I like the plot. The character tension is immediately identifiable. A lot of times in a story centered around four characters, it takes awhile to separate them out and remember who is who. This excerpt avoided that confusion and made all of the main group easily identifiable with clear personality traits.
The Jamaican accent thing was kind of cute the first time Q did it, but got old pretty quick.
The Jamaican accent thing was kind of cute the first time Q did it, but got old pretty quick.