The first person narration is very descriptive and pulls the reader into the world immediately. You can feel how frosty the emotions are given the situation that is presented and can feel a mother's pain as they reflect on their loss.
The inner reflection does drag a bit although that could be a part of the character coming to terms with their situation emotionally.
The inner reflection does drag a bit although that could be a part of the character coming to terms with their situation emotionally.