Just add more adjectives

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All That Was will appeal to a niche group of readers who enjoy dual timeline historical fiction. Otherwise, I found the writing to be overly descriptive, almost to a point of purple prose. Every noun needs an adjective and verb, an adverb. Take, for example, the following: "He licks his lips as he watches Veronica pull an extra-large casserole dish of bubbling lasagna from the wall oven." Even the innocuous, background things are so detailed. This could have used another round of heavy editing.