This needs editing. I do not mean it in the sense that there are misspellings, but rather that there is too much.
Example: "While Dave had a healthy sex drive, he wasn’t seeking casual sex
with a large number of women or a monogamous relationship. He
was looking for something somewhere in between. Ideally, he
would date several women he enjoyed spending time with, and none
of them would put demands on him. They, too, would be as free as
he was, and it would be none of his business what they did when
they weren’t with him. Unfortunately, few women seemed to be
seeking this type of arrangement." I believe that this, while would be better shown, I can also see why the author chose to keep a paragraph of it, but the next paragraph is yet another part for him to repeat how much he wants females who know that he is not in it for the commitment. He is in it for the sex and no matter what else you add in addition to this here, it will either further prove my point or will just add pages that will be skimmed or skipped as I believe readers came for the mystery.
Example: "While Dave had a healthy sex drive, he wasn’t seeking casual sex
with a large number of women or a monogamous relationship. He
was looking for something somewhere in between. Ideally, he
would date several women he enjoyed spending time with, and none
of them would put demands on him. They, too, would be as free as
he was, and it would be none of his business what they did when
they weren’t with him. Unfortunately, few women seemed to be
seeking this type of arrangement." I believe that this, while would be better shown, I can also see why the author chose to keep a paragraph of it, but the next paragraph is yet another part for him to repeat how much he wants females who know that he is not in it for the commitment. He is in it for the sex and no matter what else you add in addition to this here, it will either further prove my point or will just add pages that will be skimmed or skipped as I believe readers came for the mystery.