An FBI Missions That Reveals the Truth

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I am going to start off with what I liked. The story started off so promising. From the first sentence you were put right into the story. No waiting around to see when something would finally happen, no flipping through the pages trying to see how long until something good is going to happen. This book had the reader’s attention from the very beginning. I really liked that the author started off the way she did. This allowed us as readers to get curious about the story and then she winded back a bit to explain how the character got there. I think that the books and the plot had so much potential, but it just didn't go in a way that would have been best.

I still liked the characters and the way they interacted and the relationships that developed. I appreciate how the author tied in issues that are prevalent which could get us to get emotionally attached to the situations. I also liked that it took a new spin to being a spy and that the good guys aren’t always who you think they are. I think that the end was a real eye opener that went against the common conception.

The main character also developed through the story as she gained more information and learned what was truly important. I just wish that more of it was on the mystery in the story. It seemed like the exciting parts were pushed to the end and were resolved quickly, when the author could have had the missing people aspect throughout the story, which would have made it more entertaining for me.

My main problem with this story is that the climax made no sense to me. Like yeah it was very thrilling but there was no reason of why it happened and why the person did what they did. I also didn’t understand why she was spying on this group to begin with. Maybe that is what the author wanted, that this group had no reason to be on the FBI’s radar, but at least have a fake reason. I just think that it could have been executed better. Again, it had so much protentional and it still was a good read and I really liked the writing, but it just didn’t grab my attention as much as it could. I think that a lot of people could really like it because it did have a lot of good aspects.