This book has no hook.

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This is a horrible opener. I had to flip back and forth between prologue and chapter one a few times before figuring this out. One the prologue reads like a letter to her spouse or ex-spouse. And then chapter one starts off like it's a dream from solitary. It's very confusing and doesn't hook me. I press on a bit to see if there's any clarity and continue to be confused as job, work and description is shoved down my throat.